Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Humans always have had a knack for creativity and innovation owing to their complex brain system.These innovations bring about new
developments and consequently elicit a completely new era. But these innovations also also bring with them a new set of problems which the
creative human brain gets hooked on to and this cycle continues.
This gives a clear insight into the fact that we as a society tend to focus a larger part of our attention towards ongoing problems
rather than on future problems.This exact scenario is brought forth by scandals. we live in a society circumscribed by our limited observable
world and so we fail to see that what has not yet occured. scandals bring to light uprecedented issues and problems which were hidden from the
society. More often than not, these issues demand immediate attention as they relate to problems which no reformer or speaker ever did or could
ever do.
Inspite of the innumerable breakthroughs in the field of science,computers,technology,medicine,etc these technologies were not leveraged
to their optimal worth and were limited only to a specific sphere of influence. It was due to the advent of covid-19 that people finally started
to realize the importance of these technologies such as internet,digitalization,online trading,banking and education.It was during this time that
the loop holes in the medical services of various countries and their competence was tested and revealed. People finally understood the
importance of good hygiene and proper social conduct to which they ,otherwise,were apathetic.This strongly suggests that the human society
more or less, functions on "Necessity is the mother of invention" basis.
Traditionally ,there has been an immense respect for spiritual gurus in india.People attend their seminars and spiritual workshops in
huge numbers.One such guru was Asaram Bapu.For many years he experienced all the fame that one could yearn for.But eventually, all his
scandals unfurled and people finally saw his dark side.All his extorted money, corruption charges, abuse,harassment , indulgence in illegal activites
caused his utter downfall and got him behind the bars.This scandal revealed the harm which can be caused by superstitions,blind faith and
lack of proper knowledge which could never have been addressed by any reformer or speaker.
one cant measure the depth of the river unless one enters it. Scandals bring us face to face with our incompetency and our limited
perception about reality by addressing issues which should have been catered to earlier.They are the catalysts which kindle the necessity
for bringing about new reforms and a new order.In a tryst to solve future problems , one might oversee myopic issues that require immediate
attention but scandals uncover these issues and bring them out in the open thereby depicting the society's oblivious system of functioning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, if, so, such as, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2487.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 449.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53897550111 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63475438947 2.79657885939 130% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581291759465 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 760.5 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.696425899 60.3974514979 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.25 118.986275619 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.4166666667 23.4991977007 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.97078651685 443% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 40.0 7.80617977528 512% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191341490137 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686638270002 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069723382821 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0510936814582 0.150359130593 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588202886152 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 14.1392134831 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 48.8420337079 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 12.1743820225 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.1639044944 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.38706741573 122% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 100.480337079 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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