Most people do not care enough about environmental issues.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We are already lived side by side with our environment since the ancient ages started. Nowadays there are huge trends that most citizens do not put their attention regarding to environmental problems. I firmly believe that I have same opinions with the statement and in this essay I will emphasizing more on my opinions.
To start with, most of citizens especially teenagers feel that it is government responsibilities to maintain our environment keep intact. Furthermore, citizens already paid for public taxes so that government can give their best service to them. In addition, there are a multitude of public figure that always say the sweet commitment at first, but at the end they are betraying their followers belief so that citizens become angry and want to throw their responsibilities to taking care environmental issues to these public figures. For example; the leader of my neighborhood, disobey his jobs as a leader so that me and other members of neighborhood got irritated by him and we decided to also disobey the rules, and this phenomenon gives huge detrimental effects on our environment because both us and our leader never keep an eye on our circumstances.
The next, humanity right now are more individualistic rather than in the past and they do not care what happen to their environment as long as they can safe and keep commit their usual daily routine. For instance; I have a neighbor and he already upgrade his house to can endure flood and rain, moreover, when it comes to rainy season our neighborhood always suffering because of his action.
In conclusion, we must work together to maintain our environment keep intact and safe from any detrimental effects that will occur in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'emphasize'
Suggestion: emphasize
... the statement and in this essay I will emphasizing more on my opinions. To start with, ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the citizens') or simply say ''most citizens''.
Suggestion: most of the citizens; most citizens
... more on my opinions. To start with, most of citizens especially teenagers feel that it is go...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 578, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... example; the leader of my neighborhood, disobey his jobs as a leader so that me ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, moreover, regarding, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0243902439 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93888342369 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.2731027659 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.2 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0861673402213 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378873483729 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056699921233 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.051198649486 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338092330934 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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