You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
You should write at least 150 words.
Hello Mr. Watson,
This letter regards to my humble request to bear any potential disturbance you might have to suffer due to a party at my place next week.
Firstly, let me begin by introducing myself. I am your new neighbour Mrs Swati Malhotra who has just moved into your neighbourhood at padder street with my family last week. My husband and I are doctors by profession, who are completed by our daughter Sudha who is turning 5 soon.
As coming Thursday it is my daughter Sudha's birthday, we are planning for a small party with kids and their mothers which I also feel is an excellent opportunity to meet everyone and start to get acquainted with especially with the new neighborhood. This party would continue for a couple of hours in the evening with some DJ music in the background and lots of kids games. Furthermore, since a good number of 30 people are expected for this party, I am afraid it would get a little noisy.
Last but not the least, I would also want to seize this opportunity to cordially invite you and your kids for the above as it would be a pleasure to meet you all.
I really hope to see you soon and appreciate any patience on your side.
Thanks,
Swati Malhotra
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, really, so, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56422018349 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5661888686 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619266055046 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.0810117794 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245709580823 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851079743989 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852241744644 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143293622447 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509291888183 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.