Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs
Local news is as important as national news because local news gives us information about what is going around a particular place and its surroundings and as well as it's weather information but whereas national news is concerned with national level information and over all nations weather information. Here the manager of television station sees that they are loosing revenue and also receiving complaints from viewers regarding the coverage of local news and weather information, for which he thinks devote time specifically for weather and local news in place of national news.Here Managers needs to consider various factors before taking such decision of devoting time for weather and local news to its former level.
First of all, He/She needs to think that both national and local news need to be given of same importance and he can separately allocate time for both of them and can cut off some time from entertainment programs. Thus there no need to snub national news to cover weather and local news.
Second, there can be other reason which could be causing the losses in revenue as there could be other channels or television stations which might have shown up in recent times and can be offer better deal to local businesses. However, if the manager of the television station thinks he is losing revenue by telecasting national news, he can advertise those local businesses at the national news time only.
Other aspect that manager needs to take into consideration is, with regards to complaints from viewers, as suggested above, he can choose a separate time slot for the weather and local news and can satisfy his/her viewers.
As the saying goes, if there is a will there is way, manager of the television station can arrange both national and local news along with weather information as all of these are of paramount importance.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 312 350
No. of Characters: 1514 1500
No. of Different Words: 146 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.203 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.853 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.545 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 97 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 39 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.151 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.875 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.548 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.83 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.295 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Here
...nd local news in place of national news.Here Managers needs to consider various fact...
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... and local news to its former level. First of all, He/She needs to think that...
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Suggestion: Thus,
... some time from entertainment programs. Thus there no need to snub national news to ...
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...ews to cover weather and local news. Second, there can be other reason which ...
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...sses at the national news time only. Other aspect that manager needs to take ...
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...ews and can satisfy his/her viewers. As the saying goes, if there is a will t...
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...on station can arrange both national and local news along with weather informatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, second, so, thus, well, whereas, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 55.5748502994 70% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 2260.96107784 69% => OK
No of words: 309.0 441.139720559 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01618122977 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59985586745 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 204.123752495 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491909385113 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 705.55239521 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 19.7664670659 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.8473053892 166% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.4972972578 57.8364921388 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 193.75 119.503703932 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.625 23.324526521 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.375 5.70786347227 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369953077741 0.218282227539 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199469580275 0.0743258471296 268% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876439744134 0.0701772020484 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216090338101 0.128457276422 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939444161987 0.0628817314937 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 14.3799401198 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 48.3550499002 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 12.197005988 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 98.500998004 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 12.3882235529 238% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.1389221557 154% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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