Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
It is argued that children who are grown up in poor households tackle the dilemmas better than chlidren in rich families when they get older. From my perspective, i completely agree with this view for several reasons that will be discussed below.
There are two main reasons why I strongly agree. Firstly, children who live in poor families underwent difficult stages of their lives. Therefore, they have enough problem-solving skills to handle when they run into difficulties. Secondly, households without large of amounts of money, children usually share personal problems with their siblings. As a consequence, they can build wisdom and give acute decisions in any circumstances to cope with problems.
In addition, children who live below poverty line easily adapt to any situations. This is because their parents have taught them practical training since they were a little child. For example, children learned how to cook to help their parents and cultivate some plants in crops such as rice and maize.
In conclusion, children who have good skills to tackle problems in life when they are brought up in poor and rich families that is very relevant to contemporary society. I am of the opinion that children will have many chances to address the problems when they live in families within the shortage of finance because they know how to save money and find out measures quickly. If they easily solve the problems of adult life, they will improve the quality of their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08163265306 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59649589263 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595918367347 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8099602905 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7692307692 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28759284208 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989551918134 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658811778486 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173916254431 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363994174972 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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