Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
It is believed by some that share information with others, which are related to scientific research, business and the academic. Whereas, others think the opposite. This essay intends to discuss both viewpoints. In my opinion, I fever of the former view, because it will be helpful to other countries and it directly effects on the development of that nation.
There are many reasons why some people say that it is good to share information. Firstly, when the Country shares some information with the other nation, that time government know about that effects. India has openly given some data to the other nations. Sometimes it is about the research or a business plan, they believed in maintaining a good relationship with the other countries. In the ongoing pandemic, India has provided covid-19 research to some nations. Moreover, India also shares their business plans with the USA, besides the USA give us other information, which is related to the academic.
On the other hand, who says that some information is too important and it is detrimental, given their reason as follows. To begin with, every country have some classified information, the government have to know better than civilians. They never share that types of information which is harmful for their nation. India has numerous information related to scientific research. It is never become out. So every nation shares knowledge, which is helpful to them as well as other countries.
In recapitulation, every nation should share data that is part and parcel for the other nations. I honestly believe that every nation has not had the ability and sources to doing some research. So it is very important for every country everyone knows about the sharing is caring.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ic research, business and the academic. Whereas, others think the opposite. This essay ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, honestly, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11228070175 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70061493402 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498245614035 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6478125446 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6842105263 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389985917519 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123220232526 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904063825536 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24697623403 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471262750361 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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