Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
In modern days, adolescents are becoming more stressed than they were in the past despite the increasing development in several fields that contribute to the convenience of contemporary lives. In this essay, the dispute over certain potential issues leading to this trend will be discussed from a high schooler's perspective.
To commence with, since there have been numerous successful excavations, researches and inventions made by eminent professors and explorers with the help of state-of-the-art technology, the understanding about everything has been deepened considerably, resulting in an excessive amount of knowledge that students have to gain with a view to gaining remarkable scores from teachers. Therefore, those who fall behind with others' studies will definitely have to concern about their own studying pace and consequently expend all of their free time on learning in lieu of going out for recreational purposes.
Another reason is that parents nowadays actually put too much pressure on their children about affairs related to their career prospects. As a result, they are more likely to offer their offspring opportunities to enroll in some extra classes than encourage them to attend superfluous courses which seem to grab their attention.
On the other hand, previous lives should not also be considered as worth-living eras. The lack of knowledge about, for instance, medicine acted as a contributor to the breakout of hazardous plague catastrophes that had the capability of decimating various lives. Also, individuals in the past ought to confront food scarcity, poverty, or even death in sight of the insufficient harvest and wars ignited by the hostility among different countries and indigenous dynasties.
To conclude, while there are factors supporting that juveniles have to undergo burdens made from academic pressures frequently, I believe that the discrepancy between contemporary stresses and those in the past is not apparent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57525083612 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05252065518 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675585284281 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.1129815678 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.7 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15406067939 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525334952208 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409636506158 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721391348897 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362299828673 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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