Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extent do you agree or not?
There is currently a contentious argument over whether a society that is compounded by rules together with laws can be harmed owing to the right to have everything at the people’s disposal. I totally concur with this opinion and will outline my reasons in the essays below.
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First and foremost, one country will probably undergo a plummet in safety system if people are allowed to do whatever they want. It is clearly seen that the crime rates are on the substantial increase due to the outbreak of thousands of murder cases, drug trafficking or robberies, etc,, which lead to a common fear of being killed at any time without any awareness among various families. This is the profound culprit of today’s emerging emigration trend to the foreign countries such as The United States, or other regions of the world in view of seeking a high-quality life. Clearly, the country with a high level of criminals receives its large repercussions on economic growth or diplomatic communication, etc.. .that seems inferior to the others in the world.
What is more devastating, a lawless society can do more harm to our life than we have expected. Unless the laws and rules lay the foundation for a society, one country’s ecosystem will be on the verge of being vastly damaged by human activities. Thousands of manufacturers immortally discharge unprocessed water or even dead animals to the river or the oceans without hesitation. Lots of people that live near to the factories reported that they had been through the worst experience of the month because of the stinky smell given off by waste products together with chemicals. There is no doubt that it may be detrimental to the citizens’ health accompanied by the worsening environment.
In conclusion, no matter how the society functions with its own rituals or mindset, It plays a pivotal role in building a law policy that helps fortify and strengthen the government system in monitoring a country in terms of people life, democracy, tradition..
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
...ases, drug trafficking or robberies, etc,, which lead to a common fear of being ki...
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Line 3, column 715, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... growth or diplomatic communication, etc.. .that seems inferior to the others in t...
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Line 3, column 718, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...owth or diplomatic communication, etc.. .that seems inferior to the others in the...
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Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...rms of people life, democracy, tradition..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, then, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03293413174 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87096400066 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631736526946 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.7775164478 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.307692308 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133339206356 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408063905381 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589892994741 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720079958734 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191406251578 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
...ases, drug trafficking or robberies, etc,, which lead to a common fear of being ki...
^^
Line 3, column 715, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... growth or diplomatic communication, etc.. .that seems inferior to the others in t...
^^
Line 3, column 718, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...owth or diplomatic communication, etc.. .that seems inferior to the others in the...
^
Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...rms of people life, democracy, tradition..
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, then, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03293413174 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87096400066 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631736526946 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.7775164478 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.307692308 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133339206356 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408063905381 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589892994741 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720079958734 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191406251578 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.