“Luck plays a vital role in determining success than work ethics”
Good work ethics play a vital role to be successful but underneath luck is also one of the fortunate reasons. Luck is out of our control and immeasurable which is why it is so important to be in your favor it can give you a head start along with your excellent work ethics to carry forward.
There is no comparison among these two but they are equally important together, you can invest your time in all the attributes of work ethics like communication, cooperation, organizational skills, productivity, respect, and teamwork for self-improvement which helps to point where a road to success begin but luck is something you can’t work upon i.e. it is uncontrollable which makes it powerful, take control of what you can change and make sure you are always on top of things. In our day-to-day life, we wish for so many things, sometimes we get what we wished for because we got lucky we say, yet sometimes we don’t get it and blame the luck.
“We’re not lucky enough to have XYZ,” we say, “lucky” are those who survived, “lucky” we call someone who has a career, “lucky” are those with luxurious life. Being lucky is like magic that we all wish to have. Luck is such a complicated ingredient which is why it is not in our hands, the base of which is excellent work ethics.
Strong work ethics are necessary to start something new, or for working and usually contribute to success. Luck is powerful and immeasurable which makes it a more dangerous yet necessary factor. Our success is the mixture of both, no one thing can take you so far, you can’t get always lucky, one should have strong work ethics to support potential luck, work ethics will carry that luck farther than it would’ve taken you by just yourself.
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| 2021-10-05 | Haymide | 54 | view |
| 2021-08-01 | Geet@3 | 58 | view |
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| 2021-07-16 | Himanshi Rana | 50 | view |
- Claim In any situation the best way to persuade other people is to present them with facts and statistics rather than with emotional arguments Reason Facts are objective so they are more persuasive than subjective appeals 79
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In 66
- Schools should do more to prepare students for the non academic aspects of childhood 60
- Luck plays a vital role in determining success than work ethics 50
- In any enterprise the process of making or doing something is ultimately more important than the final product 50
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 306.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74183006536 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74693565944 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522875816993 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.553893114 60.3974514979 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.1 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 23.4991977007 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 5.21951772744 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271680020172 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130439734799 0.0831039109588 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13516682521 0.0758088955206 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187727376625 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125043476352 0.0667264976115 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 100.480337079 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.