Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, issues related to the environment rise at alarming rate in the world and debatable issues on the global platform. Many individuals advocate that the extinction of specific plants and animals are the main environmental problem. However, other masses argue that beyond this problem there are other more crucial environmental issues in the world. This essay will not only discuss both views but my opinion will be highlighted while concluding this.
At the outset, there are a myriad reason for loss of particular flora and fauna. Firstly, many tropical forests in the world on edge of extinction due to rising of industrialize and it may effect on inhabitant of animals which live in the forests. For example, the Amazon forest reduce every day and the reason behind this problem is wild fire and use forest land as the agriculture purposes, the Amazon forest is inhabitant of thousands of creatures which might affected by human activities. Secondly, many people poaching animals and stone rare species of plants for their business which would reduce the numbers of rare wildlife and plants. For instance, in the world only one white African rhino live in Zimbabwe and these types of many others animals are on edge of extinction
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On the other hand, some people believe that there are some bigger other environmental problems in the world. First and foremost is global warning, which increase day by day because of emission of toxic gases in the air and increase overall temperature of the earth. Apart from this, deforestation and wildfire reduce numbers of agriculture land which reduce crop yield and shortage of food in the world. For example, one study concluded that due to decrease in forest every year reduce 2 percentage rainfalls on the Earth.
In conclusion, it can be said that although development of surrounding area in necessary for humans, it prominent for people to save their environment as their duty. I think that the governments and people should work together on every environmental issue, not only think about plants and animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11799410029 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67323495434 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522123893805 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1068127917 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214832950002 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796491624489 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884554750363 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126517753696 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613221770382 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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