In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way.
why is this ? Do you think it is a positive or negative development ?
In current days, many companies are endeavouring to advertise that their products are new in varied ways. Personally, I believe that this development has both advantages and disadvantages because of the following reasons.
There are two possible reasons why renewing products can bring many benefits for businesses. It is true that most customers will not spend their time searching for items which seemingly look old although they don’t have any issues, and still have insurance. For example, A laptop which was placed in a warehouse several months ago can be cleaned and continuously sold as the norm because it did not contain any system-related problems. Moreover, in lieu of destroying products, renewing plays an important role in saving money and facilities, after which this trend also helps employments protecting the current environment.
However, this development has its disadvantages which may negatively affect people’s daily life. Generally speaking, many food and drink-related companies are currently fixing their products’ expiration day, thus they can easily keep customers utilizing without caring about users’ health. Scientifically speaking, nowadays, the leading factors which cause varied dangerous diseases in the world belong to unsafe foods and beverages. In terms of companies, selling unsafe products which contain hidden diseases can be fined and forced to cease their businesses. Hence, there are strict rules for those who dare to endeavour.
Conclusion, I believe that this development has both advantages and disadvantages. In terms of positive aspects, companies may save many facilities, in contrast, they can push forward their users in dangerous situations.
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Suggestion: much; little
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, thus, for example, in contrast, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75196850394 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99320587641 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641732283465 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8540482013 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.384615385 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179183683863 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665587157931 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053343717145 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127704065459 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514012638521 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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