Medical services should be run by profit-making companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, whether healthcare services should be managed by profit-oriented enterprises or not is up to debate. While I agree that this approach may help relieve the burden of overwhelming conditions on hospitals, I still believe that it will place another pressure on people who are living in porverty.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that when healthcare services are totally subsidied by the government, the public will be overdependent on their right of being taken care of. To be specific, as people can receive healthcare free of charge, they may have a tendency to rush to local hospitals to take a medical check-up and medication even with minor injuries. This may result in an overloading condition in hospitals and clinics, where lines of people are waiting, causing doctors to be exhausted and demotivated from their job. As a consequence, there may be a serious shortage of medical workforce, posing a serious threat for both healthcare centers and the government.
On the other hand, I believe that allowing profit-making firms to practice medical services will cause disadvantages for poor residents. It is because when companies provide healthcare for money, they need to compete with others for reputation in order to attract people’s reliance by employing qualified and experienced doctors and experts. As a result, they have to spend more money paying these employees the amount of salary that they deserve, entailing an increase in the fee for such services as medical examinations, prescriptions and health-related consultants. Therefore, underprivileged people are likely to suffer from long-term health problems and even life-risking diseases just because they cannot afford to pay for prohibitive bills in the hospitals.
To conclude, while healthcare services being run for free may cause pressure on people working in medical sections, I still believe that poor people’s advantages will be ignored if healthcare is provided by companies aiming at making profit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, still, therefore, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38977635783 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0940937414 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568690095847 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.3008762886 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.363636364 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4545454545 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207585136341 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867055003264 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675782736779 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142753494359 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492894937211 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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