The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems and what measures can be taken to solve this problem?
It has raised public concern over the past decades that a growing number of people has moved from rural areas to urban areas. There could be several problems why this is the case and some solutions to tackle that. This essay will examine some issues and propose some solutions.
One of the biggest causes which people have to face is overpopulation. This means that the governments can not control and balance the population rate in both agricultural areas and metropolises. It can lead to the lacking of jobs, living areas, even food. If they do not purchase daily expenses, they can turn back to the agricultural areas again. Taking Vietnam as an example, there are more job chances in Ho Chi Minh City and Ha Noi Capital, which lead to the overpopulation in two biggest metropolises in Vietnam. In addition, a plethora of individuals who are able to work can not seek for dream jobs there.
However, there are various ways to help people to alleviate this problem. Firstly the governments can levy heavy taxes in all cities and reduce it in the countries. An ever-increasing number of people who have difficulties living in urban areas will move to rural areas to find a better life. Secondly, the governments can increase the job opportunities in the countries. Taking Laos as an example, by offering more jobs in rural areas, the governments can balance between the population in both cities and agricultural areas.
In conclusion, numerous measures can be taken to solve this pitfall that will reduce the risk which can cause in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87878787879 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76198448771 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2437935458 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314143523529 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099669213834 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609765947059 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19137533664 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414376362774 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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