Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent years the trend has been changed towards tackling the finance and other emotional issues. A section of the society had thought that to continue their life with those situations is makes life easier, although others are argued that nothing is impossible to solve it. I believe they if individuals do efforts then nothing is impossible. In the course of the essay I will discuss both point of view.
On the one hand, number of the people are not had experience to deal with their lives long term issues, and the belief these are unsolvable, because they do not have ability and skills. numerous of them had other pressure on them which pull them to worse situation. For example, a job holder not leave their job in light of the fact that he believes that if he leaves this position then not able to get other jobs. In addition, they had responsibility to fulfill their family's need. However, this kind of people do have risk power.
On the other hand, people are used to change their lives, they do not follow a straight path in their lives. If seen a problem in live, they try fight with those reason and if do not have ability then learn it how to resolve it. Most of these have habits to solve issues from childhood and the know the rewards of this fight. For instance, Elon Musk had failed three time to lunched reusable rockets, however he does lose ambition then at forth time he was successful with goal.
In conclusion, a number of people do not have power to take risk and continue their lives with those things however others are fighter against the problems. I believe that we need to try to solve it while it is impossible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Numerous
...se they do not have ability and skills. numerous of them had other pressure on them whic...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...bits to solve issues from childhood and the know the rewards of this fight. For instance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54697986577 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27805888256 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53355704698 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4983524592 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116740923377 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427821546213 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310246234665 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795393205738 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031335390167 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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