In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry
why is this case?
what can be done about this problem?
The Ancient Humans began practicing agriculture thousands of years ago, that led to chain of successful events which eventually made Humans as an advanced race. Although Science and Technology made wonders in the field of agriculture, so many people in the world seldom find food. The following paragraph intends to discuss the possible reasons as well as the solution for this issue.
Multiple reason leads to such situation, for instance, political reasons like bad international policies which lead to improper distribution of resources between countries and poor infrastructure with a country causing varied distribution among different classes of people and minimal financial aid given to poor farmers by the government. In addition, patent for nuance agricultural practice are owned by corporate firms, which makes agriculture sector so vulnerable as these firms will become the deciding authoirity in terms of setting price and may act biased at times.
In view of agricultural advancements, people might have gone hunger free so many years ago. By contrast, proper meal doesn’t reach more than one third of the world population. Solution for this inhumane scenario lies in the hands of government and policy makers. Publicizing vital patent rights, schemes that focus on uplifting farmer’s living condition are few doable solutions that shall be implemented in order to improve this situation.
In conclusion, relieving the hunger is so godly than any other duty, Governments should create panel of experts, whose aim is to research deeply about this problem and provide plausible recommendations to alleviate this situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, third, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56175298805 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92720526411 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697211155378 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.5993090422 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.6 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200813735148 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735533480896 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362913407847 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119237076794 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492253191681 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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