A recently issued twenty-year study on headaches suffered by the residents of Mentia investigated the possible therapeutic effect of consuming salicylates. Salicylates are members of the same chemical family as aspirin, a medicine used to treat headaches. Although many foods are naturally rich in salicylates, food-processing companies also add salicylates to foods as preservatives. The twenty-year study found a correlation between the rise in the commercial use of salicylates and a steady decline in the average number of headaches reported by study participants. At the time when the study concluded, food-processing companies had just discovered that salicylates can also be used as flavor additives for foods, and, as a result, many companies plan to do so. Based on these study results, some health experts predict that residents of Mentia will suffer even fewer headaches in the future.
According to the recent statistics from the past twenty-year study about the suffering of headaches can be treated by consuming salicylates.This has been proved by the correlation between the rise in amount of salicylates and decline in the suffering of headaches.The following are the set of issues that author must answer.
Firstly, it is given that food is already rich in salicylates and food companies are ready to add additional salicylates for food preservation and to reduce headache, Does overdosage of salicylate will affect any sideeffects on human health?.The author must mention about this and should also mention what should be the maximum dosage of the intake of salicylates.Side effects also dangerously effect on human health. This issue weakens the conclusion.
Secondly, given that the study concluded, food-processing companies had just discovered that salicylates can also be used as flavor additives for foods, and, as a result, many companies plan to do so.What could be the mechanism which reduces the suffering of headache?. The author have focused only on salicylates about its pros and cons.But didnot mention how does it work and what experiments have been conducted and what is the percentage of reduction of suffering of headache?. If the author had discussed about this issue then it strengthens the conclusion.
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e-rater score report
No. of Words: 217 350
Minimum 250 words wanted
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 217 350
No. of Characters: 1108 1500
No. of Different Words: 120 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.838 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.106 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.863 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 79 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 58 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 36.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 21.559 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.466 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.667 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.054 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 28.8173652695 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 55.5748502994 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 2260.96107784 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 211.0 441.139720559 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41232227488 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.56307096286 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14299132444 2.78398813304 113% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 204.123752495 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568720379147 0.468620217663 121% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 705.55239521 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.8473053892 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.082367978 57.8364921388 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 190.333333333 119.503703932 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1666666667 23.324526521 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 5.70786347227 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228211490703 0.218282227539 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10818375011 0.0743258471296 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729976900204 0.0701772020484 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168809722338 0.128457276422 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065012030316 0.0628817314937 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 14.3799401198 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 48.3550499002 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 12.197005988 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 12.5979740519 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.32208582834 116% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 98.500998004 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 12.3882235529 242% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.1389221557 144% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 11.9071856287 252% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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