Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
There is no doubt that food is very important not only to fulfill natural needed of human, but also to maintain body to keep health. Several people consider to be vegetarian. They convince that stop to consuming meat and fish will bring positive impacts not only for their own body but to benefits the entire world also. In this essay, I will explain more about this view and give my perspective about this topic.
Human body need lot of nutrient that contain in others creature such as plant and animal. Vitamins, mineral, protein are the main materials for human body which is contain in vegetable. On the other hand, animals are contain about materials which lead to human for being obesity and several illness, such as heart attack or stroke. Instead people who want to have perfect body will diet and consume only vegetable. For example, fruits are rich of vitamin that suitable for anti-aging, while spinach is good for human strength.
Being vegetarian is animal friendly and also environmental friendly. Consumption of animals in a last decade are very high, especially for livestock. Producing meat need a lot of water and release much of pollutions. Meanwhile, in other hemisphere, bunch of people are difficult to obtain water for their daily activity. Furthermore, cow is one from several edible animals which release much of methane in which this material contribute to global warming. Instead, oxygen will flatter on the atmosphere if human try to grow much of plant, including vegetables and trees.
To sum up, vegetable have many benefits for human body especially for several nutrient that contain there. Whereas, animals can bring several disadvantages such as obesity and heart attack, and for the wide scale it contribute to global warming.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 316, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...n body but to benefits the entire world also. In this essay, I will explain more abo...
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Line 2, column 164, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contained'.
Suggestion: contained
... main materials for human body which is contain in vegetable. On the other hand, animal...
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Line 2, column 217, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contained'.
Suggestion: contained
...getable. On the other hand, animals are contain about materials which lead to human for...
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Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun illness seems to be countable; consider using: 'several illnesses'.
Suggestion: several illnesses
...ich lead to human for being obesity and several illness, such as heart attack or stroke. Instea...
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Line 2, column 332, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...llness, such as heart attack or stroke. Instead people who want to have perfect body wi...
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Line 4, column 216, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'contributes'?
Suggestion: contributes
...heart attack, and for the wide scale it contribute to global warming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, whereas, while, for example, no doubt, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06872852234 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53735335407 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2374836439 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.7647058824 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216476480726 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667582071888 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725499551561 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145255845911 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128861331958 0.056905535591 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.