Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is no doubt that today's businessman has doing online meetings with clients nor who mostly try to give training as well as learning part for any section to disscussions on network sites. there are plenty reasons behind this. I will talk about my point of view or what can pros and cons
Gone on the days, first and foremost, moving for good effe, technology has very swift in these days.In fact, everyone has using in their own works as far as anyone have sufficient to used for workplaces. For instance, last year's 2020 have lock down so everybody had used internet for their benefits. After that, corna virus disease have harmful for everywhere especially for kids and older persons but also government had given permiting for lockdown for one month either this lockdown counting for 1 year. Therefore, adolescents and teenagers had reset for their online classes and offlice employments had done same things like meeting or works for their homes.
Nevertheless, there is no denying that, moving forwards, some people just join to new company without any experience and training as who did not like him/ her presentation maybe staff could not appreciate thoughts for giving online interviews. Otherwise, without knowledge first time do some wrong path instead of in any jobs
All said and done, I reckon, technology is not bad things people should use in their studies and even business trips but first time do something in their work training and guides is essential for us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, i reckon, in fact, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.972 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48103526779 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.3133511628 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.375 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.25 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.375 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0837846703663 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041437321239 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468322384201 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680018039114 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313756969263 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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