Some claim that studying abroad has great benefits for a student’s home country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that giving the students the opportunity to study to the foreign countries will beneficial for their initial country. By considering some essential factors, I agree to some extent that the statement is right.
There are some positive impacts offered by the experience of study abroad for the students’s home country. Studying abroad is one of the effective ways to adopt the new knowledge and advanced technology from the other places of the world. The top-tier universities in technology like Stanford University, Massachusetts Institute of Technology (MIT) and Tokyo University, for example, are the first choices for Indonesian government to send their potential candidates to learn some new technologies. At the end, these students are hoped to be the initiators for Indonesia development in their specialization fields. In addition, the cultural changing by studying abroad also contribute to the advancement of Indonesia to take important role in globalization.
However, even though I really support the idea of sending the youngsters to study abroad, I fully aware of the demerits of this tendency. The students who study abroad are not always have the intention to come to their initial country. There are some of them who eventually decide to stay and look for a better life in the place where they had studied after the graduation, even to the extent of changing their nationality. Moreover, studying in the foreign countries do not always mean that the students will obtain a better education. Because, it depends on the education quality of their chosen university to learn. Therefore, in this case, there is no any impactful benefits for the home country.
To conclude, I agree that studying abroad is beneficial for the development of the students’s home country. However, in some certain cases, I do not ignore some contrary opinions about this phenomenon.
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...earn. Therefore, in this case, there is no any impactful benefits for the home cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30463576159 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96492070576 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516556291391 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4220165634 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374372046966 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13542052841 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837607962399 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257676330899 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350154547734 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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