“Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.”
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There’s a big contrast between the idea of keeping animals in the zoo ,actually the 1st modern zoo was established in Paris, France in 1793 and still there’s a heated discussion about such a place were animals are kept, and this is what’s this essay is about to discuss .
The argument around animals kept in zoos was firstly created when people noticed that in many countries, the animals or the creatures who’s being hosted in cages are having a violent behaviour due to the attude they are treated with , rather than the same animal from the same species who are living a normal life in a normal ambience or environment they are having a normal behaviour according to their species , animals which lives in different environment are suffering while they shouldn’t .
Some cultures says that by keeping animals away from wild life specially the ‘endangered species ‘ its for the sake of them ,its keeping them away from the environment which hurt them in their point of view , its protecting them from extinction , and its useful for the humming beings as well, first its creating job oprtunites so its useful for economy , while at the same time taking kids to such a place its making them to know more about the Mother Nature , which is good for there mental health .
In conclusion , keeping animals in a zoo is not making any difference in our culture , or life in my opinion animals are such a important creatures in our life that keeping them away makes them such a bad mystery thing for us , while we should be learning about them for every single day of our life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76086956522 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45232316159 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536231884058 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.058722461 49.4020404114 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 328.5 106.682146367 308% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.0 20.7667163134 332% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.5 7.06120827912 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167304873294 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103029325188 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0209085354362 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103029325188 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209085354362 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.5 13.0946893788 271% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.9 50.2224549098 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 11.3001002004 257% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.51 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 9.78957915832 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.