Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
It would be argued by some that children should be taught how to become a useful person for society at school. In my opinion, however, parents play an extremely important role in educating children about it.
On the one hand, there are a number of the reasons why people think that school is the place for children to learn how to be a good member of society. Firstly, school designs educational specific programs for each different stage. Children, therefore, are learnt lots of suitable skills as well as necessary knowledge for their ages. Moreover, teacher staffs are trained professionally in order to instruct and give standard lessons for their students.
On the other hand, I would argue that parental responsibility in developing their offbrings is utmost necessary. Parents not only give instructions about knowledge in life but also form personalities for their children. Mom and dad are always beside their babies, thus, they can understand and share all things that their children need. If children are forced by some stress or boredom in school, parents will be the first ones who support and help them. My daughter, for instance, sometimes feels bored with school timetable. At that time, my encouragement brings her more relaxed and confident.
In conclusion, although some people consider that children should be educated to become a good person for society. I personally believe that developing offrings’ background depends much on parental responsibility.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29237288136 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83272774057 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648305084746 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.443051811 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.2142857143 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277747369594 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094730472476 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087979665091 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181824863246 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356028819878 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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