Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, there is an argument that present technology helps people to buy things online in an easy way, while others disagree with this statement. This essay will discuss both the viewpoints and also prove why online shopping is more convenient than the traditional way.
On the one hand, some people disagree with the previously mentioned statement because of the quality of a product. For instance, people receive poor quality products that they bought online since they do not get a chance to check the materials with their hands and the only possible way is only to read the illustrations in the description box. In addition, they might be cheated by getting a poor quality of the materials.
However, on the other hand, despite having some negative sides, it also comes with some positivenesses such as convenience and time-saving. Since many a person around the world is too busy to go to the market, online shopping is an optimal way for them to save time to perform other tasks. For example, online apps like Amazon, or Shopee offer many kinds of goods that can be ordered from home and delivered in one to five days. As a result, they do not need to worry to go outside and purchase those products.
In conclusion, I believed that modern technology has a significant number of advantages to help people buy things online. However, we should be aware of the quality of a product and check carefully the information of the goods as well as the apps.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an easy way" with adverb for "easy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ology helps people to buy things online in an easy way, while others disagree with this statem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78260869565 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62197482597 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588932806324 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2505874205 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9090909091 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157018588345 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586083320341 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054205573938 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09484391362 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455467268226 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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