Poor nutrition and obesity is a problem in many developed countries and some people believe that a tax on fast food would reduce the problem. Do you agree?
With the mass development of life conditions and living standard, people in many wealthy countries are increasingly suffering from poor nutrition and obesity which demand for a practical solution. While many claim that tax enhancement would mitigate the problems, I’m strongly against this idea. In these following paragraphs, I will give clear evidence and support my statements.
To begin with, the rising tax does not only ease this situation but it also raises the indignation of the customers when their favors are being imposed with the new tax. Because of the fact that junk food has been the dominant goods worldwide, any authorities who intend to impose new taxes on it would bring counterproductive effects such as detest campaigns or some strong criticism,... Apparently, people are continuing to purchase fast food given the fact that they are all aware of its consequences in the long run. Therefore, this alarming phenomenon cannot be tackled in just a matter of days or weeks.
The first and foremost solution is to try to alter people’s self consciousness about the harmful effects of fast food which requires the joint hand of both government, citizens and even some food organizations,.. Clearly, the propaganda campaign via social networks, newspapers, TV programs,.. will help upgrade the belief of people on fast food and gradually rule out the dominance of junk food. Another approach to put into consideration is to cooperate with the fast food production to try new healthy products instead of burgers or chickens,.. Hence, this process will last yearly so if the locals offer enough efforts they will definitely alter this reality.
To conclude, although imposing a new tax is a great option to deal with poor nutrition and obesity in developed countries to some extent, but it would make no sense if the customers did not change their habits. From my own perspective, I strongly detest this approach and offer some proper solutions.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: 'many claims'.
Suggestion: many claims
... demand for a practical solution. While many claim that tax enhancement would mitigate the...
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Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: Because
...ors are being imposed with the new tax. Because of the fact that junk food has been the dominant goods w...
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Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed with the new tax. Because of the fact that junk food has been the dominant goo...
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Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...etest campaigns or some strong criticism,... Apparently, people are continuing to...
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Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or some strong criticism,... Apparently, people are continuing to purchase fast f...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...itizens and even some food organizations,.. Clearly, the propaganda campaign via s...
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Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...tizens and even some food organizations,.. Clearly, the propaganda campaign via so...
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Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...social networks, newspapers, TV programs,.. will help upgrade the belief of people...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...ocial networks, newspapers, TV programs,.. will help upgrade the belief of people ...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Will
...al networks, newspapers, TV programs,.. will help upgrade the belief of people on fa...
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Line 3, column 544, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... products instead of burgers or chickens,.. Hence, this process will last yearly s...
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Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...products instead of burgers or chickens,.. Hence, this process will last yearly so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, while, even so, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16927899687 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8753447503 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630094043887 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0306030631 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.785714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256030122963 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781213645058 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690182377628 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15756600118 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361191433065 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: 'many claims'.
Suggestion: many claims
... demand for a practical solution. While many claim that tax enhancement would mitigate the...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: Because
...ors are being imposed with the new tax. Because of the fact that junk food has been the dominant goods w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed with the new tax. Because of the fact that junk food has been the dominant goo...
^^
Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...etest campaigns or some strong criticism,... Apparently, people are continuing to...
^^
Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or some strong criticism,... Apparently, people are continuing to purchase fast f...
^^
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...itizens and even some food organizations,.. Clearly, the propaganda campaign via s...
^^
Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...tizens and even some food organizations,.. Clearly, the propaganda campaign via so...
^^
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...social networks, newspapers, TV programs,.. will help upgrade the belief of people...
^^
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...ocial networks, newspapers, TV programs,.. will help upgrade the belief of people ...
^^
Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Will
...al networks, newspapers, TV programs,.. will help upgrade the belief of people on fa...
^^^^
Line 3, column 544, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... products instead of burgers or chickens,.. Hence, this process will last yearly s...
^^
Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...products instead of burgers or chickens,.. Hence, this process will last yearly so...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, while, even so, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16927899687 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8753447503 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630094043887 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0306030631 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.785714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256030122963 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781213645058 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690182377628 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15756600118 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361191433065 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.