The gap between the rich and the poor is wider, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause and what measures can be done to address those problems?
It is true that the growing disparity between the wealthy and the poor has become one of our major concerns in this era of ever-evolving development in most fields. This undoubtedly might result in several problems that require prompt solutions to be implemented.
To begin with, increasing levels of poverty resulting from the expanding gap between different social classes may promote the rise of crimes. While the upper class continues getting richer, their counterparts desperately struggle with the meager income they earn, which is unable to provide them with even the most basic demands. At the same time, that the labor market has become more competitive than ever makes it more challenging for impoverished individuals to land a job to get by. This forces them to unwillingly commit crimes, namely robbery, in order to survive, thereby boosting the number of crime’s incidents which might threaten a nation’s security. Besides, rising wealth disparity may lead to social inequality. To clarify, those who are born into such an affluent family will be offered more opportunities to access better education, which prepares them with essential weapons for the turbulent upcoming future. Meanwhile, that would be far from reach of the lower class due to the income inequality.
With a view to narrowing down this social gap, it is firstly the government’s responsibility to allocate more budget spending on education. More scholarships can be given to those growing up in a poor family to encourage them on their learning paths. Furthermore, schools, especially in remote areas, should be well-equipped to ensure everyone has equal access to education. Only by widening education to all walks of life can the authorities help people to gain the chance of turning pages for their lives. Last but not least, more job opportunities should be created to answer the quest of most underemployed individuals living in severe poverty these days.
To recapitulate, I believe that education can serve as the key tool to weave the gap between the rich and the poor sectors which have caused a plethora of issues for the present time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21739130435 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86316663284 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620289855072 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0551646371 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192766798131 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582726876098 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534540201035 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132381145817 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503183159594 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.