some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person culture and character from their choice of clothes
Nowadays, it is believed that society say possible to tell a lot about person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. In this essay I completely agree this statement because it has more advantages rather than disadvantages for some reason.
On the other side, the main benefit of people diffrentiate person’s from their culture and character is easy to know people from the other country, it is due to just from their character and how to speaking, we can fast to tell they are come from where, for example when I work in some resort, Iam find a lot of kinds people from different country only from the way they order food and drink, as result chacater its really helpful people to know each other. Additionally, we can learning about various of foerign culture, since specifically meet with people who come from country which have a lot of culture, for example I have been take conversation with foreign from India, at that moment I get many experience and information about their personality, so that people can getting much knowledge from the other people especially foreign.
However, there are some drawback in this problem, first of all we can not understand much about the character of a person by looking their clothes, it is because that a people have different characteristic since they are child, for instance a lot of humans from abroad visit to my country by wearing many kinds of clothes, so that I need to ask to know they are from where. Secondly the character style can not be considered an effective way to describe the personality, since the personality in considered one of vaguest features of human being created. Take as on example with changing lifesyle hard to know identity someone just from character recently, so that need learn more about culture and increase our knowledge.
In Conclusion, from where I stand, I believe that difficult to judges people just from their character, culture and clothes, for good away people need more learning about foreign people and many asking about their habbit and personality to get excellent information.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 479, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'learn'
Suggestion: learn
...o know each other. Additionally, we can learning about various of foerign culture, since...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 697, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much experience', 'a good deal of experience'.
Suggestion: much experience; a good deal of experience
...oreign from India, at that moment I get many experience and information about their personality...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the vaguest'.
Suggestion: of the vaguest
...since the personality in considered one of vaguest features of human being created. Take a...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94886363636 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67143961522 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491477272727 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.967712634 49.4020404114 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 217.75 106.682146367 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.0 20.7667163134 212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.75 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.469663861482 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.232523991024 0.084324248473 276% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174258406212 0.0667982634062 261% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321350048271 0.151304729494 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672110568064 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 479, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'learn'
Suggestion: learn
...o know each other. Additionally, we can learning about various of foerign culture, since...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 697, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much experience', 'a good deal of experience'.
Suggestion: much experience; a good deal of experience
...oreign from India, at that moment I get many experience and information about their personality...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the vaguest'.
Suggestion: of the vaguest
...since the personality in considered one of vaguest features of human being created. Take a...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94886363636 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67143961522 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491477272727 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.967712634 49.4020404114 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 217.75 106.682146367 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.0 20.7667163134 212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.75 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.469663861482 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.232523991024 0.084324248473 276% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174258406212 0.0667982634062 261% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321350048271 0.151304729494 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672110568064 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.