An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies of shopping online?
In the modern days with the advent of technology, e-commerce has become the main element in human societies. The tendency of online shopping is rapidly increasing day after day, which is assumed that has enormous benefits for both buyer and seller. Shopping through the Internet gets its own numerous advantages; however, there are some disadvantages it can bring to the buyer. This essay will discuss both merits and drawbacks of this trend.
To begin with, our world now becomes a global village with the presence of the Internet; hence, more and more individuals engage with their smart electronic devices to do anything conveniently from the net. This has led to e-commerce attracting lots of people to join due to the benefit of saving time when ordering something. Most individuals do not want to waste their time standing and picking something or bargaining with any kind of shopkeeper, instead they open their mobiles or tabs to order any types of stuff they need. For example, many housewives will spend less time to go the market, which is far from their houses by using phones, scrolling through online stores and placing orders for any stuff they want, and waiting for the products delivered to their houses in a short time. Therefore, online shopping now is a trend and plays a fundamental part in improving the lifestyle among thousands of folks.
On the flip side, there are many negative sides that deter buyers from believing in online shopping. One of the main bad side effects faced by individuals is scammers. Any corporation will show the best quality of their products to attract the concern of buyers and purchase them, but when we receive the order it is another cheap thing. For example, according to the news that has been reported recently on TV, one man placed an order for a mobile phone at a huge price, but he received the package, it was not the cell he had chosen and whenever he claimed the company, he found that he was blocked.
Put it all together, the tendency of online shopping has its own values but also drawbacks. Although it would take individuals less time to choose, put stuff in brackets and place an order from online stores by only using their smartphones. Someone will be hesitant to follow this trend since scammers are becoming in numerous times and leaving huge consequences for both companies' customer beliefs and also buyers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 372, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
... and leaving huge consequences for both companies customer beliefs and also buyers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for example, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87192118227 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51483984042 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566502463054 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4862116377 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.625 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211036601535 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656422603532 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464032120524 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126989095909 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360430804226 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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