In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and society? Give reasons and make some suggestions.
There has been a sharp increase in the unemployment rate with alarming speed, especially among the juvenile, which has stirred up great concerns. This essay will shed light on the possible reasons as well as give several solutions to deal with this issue.
As a matter of fact, the rise in the youth unemployment rate is going to have a negative impact on society as a whole. Firstly, a huge amount of unemployment definitely put a tremendous strain on society in every aspect. This is because if the unemployed do not get any jobs, the government has to take care of them by aiding social security funds, or social welfare. In a long term, this may lead to running out of financial sources available, far beyond economic crisis. Consequently, not only is the economy affected, but also other areas such as education, and the median could be undeveloped as well.. Regarding individuals, one who cannot land a sufficient and stable job in a certain period of time may suffer from stress stemming from their families and friends. In long run, they are prone to psychological matters such as depression and death in extreme cases. For instance, in Japan, where a small proportion of jobless young people, called hikikomori, refuse to communicate with the outside and perpetuate their life by social funding.
Actions should be taken as soon as possible to minimize the detrimental effects arising from the unemployment rate. Firstly, one strategy can be adopted in education. In order to increase the employment rate, learners have to be trained and taught in a proper method associated with the job requirements these days. Besides, the authorities should introduce updated educational programs to narrow the knowledge gap between the past and today, vocational programs for example. Many countries, especially in Africa need to raise citizens’ awareness of the importance of sustenance education so as to bring down the dropped rate. Moreover, the role of parental support is pretty crucial in guiding youngsters to purchase their career path. It is proven that students who receive a great deal of support from their parents stand a higher chance of being successful in their future life.
In conclusion, high youth unemployment is going to be detrimental effects on the economy and social situation of a country. In the fight against unemployment among the young generation, both government and parents should share the burden with the aim of ensuring the future generation.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 605, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... the median could be undeveloped as well.. Regarding individuals, one who cannot l...
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Line 3, column 692, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... sufficient and stable job in a certain period of time may suffer from stress stemming from th...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... the importance of sustenance education so as to bring down the dropped rate. Moreover, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13054187192 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84806290344 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5960591133 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6449908883 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.631578947 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3684210526 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42105263158 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0894640109879 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259707126353 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261799341801 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574550712878 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194139856111 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 605, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... the median could be undeveloped as well.. Regarding individuals, one who cannot l...
^^
Line 3, column 692, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... sufficient and stable job in a certain period of time may suffer from stress stemming from th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 590, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... the importance of sustenance education so as to bring down the dropped rate. Moreover, ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13054187192 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84806290344 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5960591133 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6449908883 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.631578947 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3684210526 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42105263158 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0894640109879 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259707126353 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261799341801 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574550712878 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194139856111 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.