Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is widely believed that when an unfortunate situation like shortage of money occurs, people had better accept to it. However, others claim that it is better to try all their best to overcome this situation. As far as I am concerned, I do agree with the second point of view due to several reasons below.
From the one side, there are some reasons for people to try and improve the bad situation. First of all, this help people improve their solving skill, which is extremely vital for human's further achievements. Therefore, anyone who practices solving problems effectively can be promoted to higher positions one day. Second of all, after overcoming the bad situations successfully, people will receive numerous congratulations and mark a certain milestone in their lives. For example, Thomas Edition is well-known for his invention in light bulbs before being funded by others to carry on other experiments in the rest of his life. Last but not least, it is firmly believed that improvements are possible with people who have a suitable attitude and make a lot of efforts.
From the other side, others believe it is better to accept these bad situations due to their unfounded belief in a better future. They think that if they have a positive thought to accept all the unfortunate things, the life will bring them the luckiness in a near future. As a result, they cannot come over their safety zones and gain any special achievements any more.
Taking everything into consideration, people have to weigh up in their thoughts to what extent this issue should be supported. However, the discussions are convincing enough to lead me to the conclusion that people should try all their best to improve the negative conditions instead of being suffered from them
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 57, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...e, there are some reasons for people to try and improve the bad situation. First of all...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94949494949 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70148677827 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582491582492 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5866908165 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250426942311 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887482763925 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854472679825 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153925873521 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580551031213 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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