Write about the following topic:
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
These days, almost all of us have at least a computer of a kind or another, be it a desktop, laptop, PDA, smartphone or tablet. It has helped us in our life and work, thus changing them possibly forever that it is argued that they are the greatest invention of the last 100 years.
Computers have definitely changed our life for the better. As they evolved from the most basic machines with only calculating capabilities to today's small but multi-purpose ones, things have been easier than ever. Calculating and working out revenues and expenses used to be daunting. Computers have allowed us to do so with ease, provided you have the required skills. They also changed the way we are entertained, thanks to digital video and games with crystal clear picture quality and state-of-the-art graphics. With them and the Internet, we can also access a wide world of knowledge and communicate with our loved ones anywhere and at anytime as well as making more friends.
However, once we use them frequently and get addicted to them, they can do harm to us. The beautiful images generated from their screens can cause hallucinations that affects a person's thinking, leading to crimes. The price tags of them can also be prohibitive, thus can prevent the poor from affording them. Remember, they are definitely not needed for our life.
To sum up, computers are undoubtedly the most important invention of the last century, though both positively and negatively. Therefore, we must ultilize them properly to get the most out of them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 621, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...nowledge and communicate with our loved ones anywhere and at anytime as well as maki...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, at least, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92635658915 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75243198972 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9269134748 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7857142857 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132170308318 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489022031958 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309628106851 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842474261781 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237724013217 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.