The following argument was made in a newspaper editorial:
“The autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders; if the number of illegal immigrants entering a country cannot be checked, both its economy and national identity are endangered. Because illegal immigrants pose such threats, every effort must be made to return them to their country of origin.”
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted
The argument is talking about the importance of strength of its border for the autonomy of any country. But there are some other unstated assumptions are scene. It is necessary to explain more about the assumptions to strengthen the argument.
In the first part of the argument, it is pointed out that if the number of illegal immigrants entering a country cannot be checked, both its economy and national identity are endangered. But how can we corroborate that these are the only reason to challenge its autonomy? There are several reasons. It is sure that a country should strengthen its borders. But at the same time it should be necessary to ensure the citizens are not doing any illegal activities that endanger the country's economy and national identity. There may be any chance that any officials obtained for prices for other country. So it should be necessary to make it clear that how the illegal immigrants are endanger to the country. There may be a chance that they sell more foreign products in this country and persuade the people in this country to reject the native products. Also there is a chance to make people believe that the quality of education, job and living atmosphere of foreign countries are excellent than the native country. So they might lure to other countries.All these are examples of how the illegal immigrants are danger to the country. It is necessary to state these points following the assumption. It will strengthen argument.
The claim in the last sentence is that the illegal immigrants pose threats and therefore efforts must be made to return them to their country of origin. The assumption is undoubtedly correct. I agree with it. Lots of the developed countries are strengthening their borders to ensure the autonomy of the country. But it also necessary to explain how it is to made possible. How to identify the illegal immigrants. Also, it is necessary to explain what are efforts to be taken to rectify this. There may be an strong armed force would be checking the countries border. There should be officials to notice what are the activities of these immigrants. Whether they impose any threat to the country or not. Also, there should be officers to check all the personal documents of every people. It is necessary to make these things strict. All these explanations will fortify the assumption made in the argument.
In conclusion, the assumption in the argument is definitely correct. But it is necessary to explain more about it. This will strengthen the assumptions depicted in the argument.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 679, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'endangered'.
Suggestion: endangered
...ear that how the illegal immigrants are endanger to the country. There may be a chance t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 850, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... country to reject the native products. Also there is a chance to make people believ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 1051, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: All
.... So they might lure to other countries.All these are examples of how the illegal i...
^^^
Line 3, column 506, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... be taken to rectify this. There may be an strong armed force would be checking th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.6327345309 188% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 28.8173652695 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 2260.96107784 94% => OK
No of words: 430.0 441.139720559 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94651162791 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7257450939 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 204.123752495 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.404651162791 0.468620217663 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 705.55239521 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.67365269461 299% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 19.7664670659 157% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.8473053892 57% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3675999742 57.8364921388 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6129032258 119.503703932 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.8709677419 23.324526521 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.45161290323 5.70786347227 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 6.88822355289 160% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.67664670659 214% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382250664499 0.218282227539 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918380194979 0.0743258471296 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898894946448 0.0701772020484 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211423384531 0.128457276422 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100465714566 0.0628817314937 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 14.3799401198 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.197005988 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.5979740519 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.32208582834 86% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 98.500998004 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.1389221557 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.9071856287 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 679, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'endangered'.
Suggestion: endangered
...ear that how the illegal immigrants are endanger to the country. There may be a chance t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 850, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... country to reject the native products. Also there is a chance to make people believ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 1051, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: All
.... So they might lure to other countries.All these are examples of how the illegal i...
^^^
Line 3, column 506, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... be taken to rectify this. There may be an strong armed force would be checking th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.6327345309 188% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 28.8173652695 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 2260.96107784 94% => OK
No of words: 430.0 441.139720559 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94651162791 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7257450939 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 204.123752495 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.404651162791 0.468620217663 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 705.55239521 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.67365269461 299% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 19.7664670659 157% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.8473053892 57% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3675999742 57.8364921388 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6129032258 119.503703932 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.8709677419 23.324526521 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.45161290323 5.70786347227 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 6.88822355289 160% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.67664670659 214% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382250664499 0.218282227539 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918380194979 0.0743258471296 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898894946448 0.0701772020484 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211423384531 0.128457276422 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100465714566 0.0628817314937 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 14.3799401198 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.197005988 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.5979740519 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.32208582834 86% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 98.500998004 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.1389221557 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.9071856287 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.