Effective leaders
A concrete definition of the ideal qualities of a leader effective has been subject of debate for a long time. Other contend that ability tangible results and development are what qualifies an efficient leaders, while others are of the view that ability to lead masses makes one an ideal leader. The prompt suggests that to be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this recommendation, and argue that public officials who exhibit highest moral and ethical standards make the most effective leaders for two two reasons
To begin with, leaders are role models of the people. A role model is a person who is looked up to by other people and used as an example to emulate. Knowingly or unknowingly, leaders are role models of the masses they lead.Their conducts influences the general population. It is also logical that every leaders wish is to have a social that is ethical and upholds high moral standards. So, it is only right that leaders, being role models of people, lead by example by exhibiting the highest moral and ethical standards for the people to follow. China, which is renowned for having the best and most effective leaders, requires that all leaders and those aspiring to be leaders, have the highest ethical standards. Through this rule, China selects only good role models for the people, who have proven to be the most effective leaders. Before this system was put in place, there was a leadership crisis in china and that drastically changed and the country now boasts of having the most effective leaders. From this we can see if not for the changes put in place , china would probably still be facing leaders crisis. But, do you the changes put in place of requiring leaders who are ethically and morally upright, the country now has effective leaders who are good role models for the citizens.Thus, it is very clear that leaders being role models of the people. ought to uphold the highest moral and ethical standards.
History also shows us that the most effective leaders are those who maintained the highest ethical and moral standards. There are many public officials recorded who prove the claim. One perfect example is LIncon, the former American president. History remembers Lincon as a noble man who did not compromise on his ethics and morals. Due to his strong ethics, he was adored by the people he lead. As a result, he effectively governed the masses, and today he is regarded as one of the best American presidents. Another great example of such a leader is Nelson Mandela. Mandela, a former president of South Africa, and a freedom fighter, is regarded as one of the most effective leaders. Because people took his as an ethical man, his ideas where easily accepted by the people. He implemented many projects as a president in his country that people followed without question because they believed it was the best as he was a noble man who meant well. Furthermore, he convinced the citizens not to resort to violence and they obeyed. Today he is used as a perfect example of a leader who exhibited the highest moral standards. From these examples it is clear that having the highest moral and ethical values played a very huge role in shaping Lincon and Mandela as effective leaders. Had they been unethical or morally corrupt, they wouldn't have effectively lead their subjects as effectively as they did.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, still, thus, well, while, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.5258426966 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.3162921348 221% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2858.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 587.0 442.535393258 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86882453152 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9222030514 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53935199906 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424190800681 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 910.8 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8368767652 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.071428571 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9642857143 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344362047223 0.243740707755 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109548562125 0.0831039109588 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104539393279 0.0758088955206 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279267664237 0.150359130593 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489561581983 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.