The typical teaching situation of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by the year 2050. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is agrued that the typical teaching situation of a tutor and adolesence in the classroom will no exist in the near future. From my point of view, i mostly agree with this notion because of its correctly. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the international world and with the appearance of modern innovation such as smart phone, so technology is hugely significant for the individuals life. Not only can it replace teacher at academic school, cource or unniversities, but also the numerous knowledge will be provided to the teenagers such as physical book, hard cover and value information. Furthermore, robots have been replaced a various of occupation or fields in all around the world like enviroment worker, crop fammer or unneccessary staff, so education will not an exception. To illustrate, there was a statistic by Ramster, the famous scientist professtional which about the percentage of unemployment in london. The servay showed that the number of unemployment had increased graduately during 2000 to 2050.
Howerver, we can not negate the inportance of typical teacher for the children development. The young generation will be transmited deether knowledge or real experience by their tutor, and also listening, giving advantage advice to their diffical problem or challenge. Moreover, being helpful friends of each teenager, so teacher is really inportant in the growth of each adolesence.
To conclude, by my agrument from these essay that totally agree with this statement, but teach will always keep a significant function in the children growth. The parents need to have clear plan to improve their youngs to contribute abilities for development of the nation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29197080292 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97066840923 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638686131387 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8883233995 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156772668662 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522639189189 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570251243736 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094693552055 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485172135644 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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