Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, an increasing number of people are concern about the impact of technology in human life. However, whether many adults are working from home, and more children are starting to learn from home because the feature of remote connection via modern technology is a controvesial issue. A large number of people assume that this evolution is crucial and pros element to people's life. From my personal opinion, I strongly agree with this opinion. This essay will detail the grounds for my perspective as follows.
On the one hand, due to the advent of internet and smart electronic devices, the process of studying gradually becomes conveniently. This means that not only can learners have various place and whenever they have leisure time but they are also effortless to determine diverse information on the Internet. Therefore, technological development brings students essential assistance.
Moreover, the feature of current equipment creates many benifical condition for workers. For example, labors could possess flexible duration and location in period of working, especially with employees or employers who apruptly have trouble making them arduous to go to workplace or introverts. This is because a lot of people in existing society who own trait of introverts often obtain predisposition about work productively at home more than at fieldwork.
That is not to say that this progression does not cause adverse outcomes. Undoubtedly, what imposition of technological tool people could be unfavourably affected mental and physical health and even excessive dependence on smart electronic machine without using brain. Notwithstanding, if because of those drawbacks, people do not continue to advance technology, quality of human would diminish immediately.
In conclusion, I think this development has more positive aspect for people's life than negative side.
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Suggestion: Many; Numerous
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57192982456 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97044019089 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670175438596 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5834905658 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.866666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281674776492 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079920596452 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089601908291 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142745643862 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824036219836 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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