Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ? Write at leats 250 words.
In my point of view, to live and work in another country has a huge number of benefits, as well as difficulties. The disadvantages are able to exist in both two aspects : society and practicality, in a serious way. I completely agree , in contrast to this.
First, let’s discuss the social problems of living in a foreign nation. I believe that a good range of language is very necessary for people who want to live and work in a different country; but also a drawback for those who don’t have it. Overseas citizens literally find difficult in communication at first when they live in a country, and this problem can cause many embarrassing situations, or misunderstanding with locals.
Afterwards, I want to talk about the matters that are related to practicality. Because of the difference between culture and culture, some actions or sayings of foreigners that are innocent, can coincidentally offend the native people. Just similar to English citizens, for instance, cannot accept impolite behaviours, though those manners can be normal in other countries.
The majority of settlers needs jobs for their living when they first come to an other-language-speaking country. Perhaps their aspects cannot satisfy the requests of foreign businesses and corporations. This is because of the distinction between cultures and market requirements in different countries. In addition to this, natives can also look down on or behave badly with overseas. It’s called “Discrimination causes disrespect”.
In conclusion, living in a foreign country , besides its benefits, can really cause serious issues related to society and practicality as well. Settlers can get in trouble with their language barriers, misconceptions with locals and awkward situations in their daily lives. Also, they are capable to find the distinguish between cultures, which can make them be rejected by businesses, or be behaved disrespectfully by native citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, incidentally, look, really, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41914191419 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31366747832 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610561056106 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6187438622 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5882352941 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250295322255 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750525930091 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605280174051 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130061330636 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553538933162 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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