Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
There have always been an argument among people whether we right now have a much more comfortable life compared to our grandparents. There is no shortage of opinion on the matter of this thesis. In my opinion individuals nowadays live a more of an advanced life, which can be concidered easier in some means. I feel the way for two main reasons, which i will be demonstrating in the following passage.
First of all, we live in a very productive world which make it easier for us to accomplish certain things. Obviosly our life can't be considered too easy since it is a complicated world but comparing our lives to the past ones we can debate that we live an easier life. In contrast, our grandparents had to work hard to achieve their primary needs in life. If i have to give an example we don't go through much trouble to have access variety of fruits in our own city. Our elders on the other hand, if they wanted some item out of their region they had to wait. Consiquently, we can accept the rightfulness of the fact that we live easier.
Secondly, having the ability to access internet has had made our lifes a lot easier. The internet lets us stay in our very own house and also get our hand on everything we desire even if it's available only in another continent. With the progress of online shops it's gotten easier to live. Thus our grandparents who had to wait a long time for their desired item to arrive can accuse our lives of being not so difficult. If we'd not have had the luxuries that we own, we wouldn't have the life that we're taking for granted.
In conclusion, we are concidered to own a more comfortable life than the ones in the past. This is because we have to work less for our minimum life essensials compared to our grand parents and also because we have the luxury of accessing the internet which helps a grate amount in our day to day life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 353, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eel the way for two main reasons, which i will be demonstrating in the following ...
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Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...plish certain things. Obviosly our life cant be considered too easy since it is a co...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sier life. In contrast, our grandparents had to work hard to achieve their primar...
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Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to achieve their primary needs in life. If i have to give an example we dont go th...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n life. If i have to give an example we dont go through much trouble to have access ...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...online shops its gotten easier to live. Thus our grandparents who had to wait a long...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...t have had the luxuries that we own, we wouldnt have the life that were taking for gran...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40634005764 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48861570936 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521613832853 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.821931933 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9411764706 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141946928989 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601501662492 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577221257585 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104570428339 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193316923049 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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