Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
To commence with, technology has simplified our lives because high-tech allows people to have a normal life regardless of any setbacks. With the aid of technological devices such as the internet and computers, people can work and connect together on a global scale. The Covid 19 pandemic is a typical case in point. Thanks to distance learning, the educational system could stay stable. From the economic perspective, had it not been for teleworking, the economic situations of the whole world would have been in deep trouble. Technology, without a doubt, enabled businesses to run smoothly amidst the situation of a catastrophic and devastating epidemic. As a result, we have witnessed enormous recoveries from economic recession or even splendid growth. It is no exaggeration to say that the advantages technology brings about know no bounds.
Additionally, the solution of living without technology sounds ineffective and unreasonable. There is no denying the fact that various social platforms such as Facebook, Zalo and Instagram, to name but a few, have paved the way for far more convenient and rapid communication compared to the past. People across the globe can now send messages and make a phone call within just a few seconds irrespective of physical distance. By contrast, in the absence of technology, we could not keep in touch with one another comfortably in the long run.
In conclusion, I hold the firm belief that technology makes our lives less complex for the mentioned benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 795, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'advantages'' or 'advantage's'?
Suggestion: advantages'; advantage's
.... It is no exaggeration to say that the advantages technology brings about know no bounds....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23553719008 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03006416539 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665289256198 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5268807558 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4615384615 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157964030566 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560455863223 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785063354967 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120565898059 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422931098106 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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