The increasing housing problem in big cities has social consequences. Some people say that only government can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, big cities have to face rising housing issues that lead to many social consequences. Many individuals calm that the state is the only one that can address this problem. In my opinion, I partially agree with the aforementioned statement.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why the number of accommodations in the city rose that will lead to many social problems. Firstly, the main reason is that the number of citizens has increased dramatically in recent years to find a better life than their hometown, which leads to overpopulation in the metropolis. This is usually due to results from the facilities and qualification in the metros is always higher quality than the suburban areas. Consequently, the density of population in the cities is alarmingly high, while other places are emptied. Additionally, the rate of criminals will rise considerably, threatening the safety of cities and citizens. For example, the report of Vnexpress shows that the rate of thief in Ha Noi grew significantly from 5% to nearly 20% in 2020. Many professionals said that it is a consequence of increasing the number of residents in the capital.
Despite these aforementioned dilemmas, I strongly believe it can be addressed by the authorities. The government should improve the standard of living in the rural areas for the people. For example, moving factories and plants to suburban areas in order to create more job opportunities for local people. The park, school and hospital should be built with high quality, which serves the residents. Additionally, the state should improve transportation systems with urban areas around the city, which is easier to transport to the heart of cities. It will encourage citizens moving to the suburban areas to buy houses, which reduces the rate of population in the cities. Moreover, the officials have a policy of migrating to the cities, making some conditions for people who want to live in the city. If people want to have a life in the city, they will demonstrate that they have a parliamentary job in the city.
In conclusion, the rising accommodation issue in the cities has many problems, I strongly believe the solution should be given by the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, while, as for, as to, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0597826087 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99901527632 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51902173913 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1083799945 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3684210526 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150132098085 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044004086818 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513111522043 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985259199401 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858378025768 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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