Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?
Many criminals engage in more crimes once they are out of the prison. This essay will tackle the main causes for the issue, and state the effects it may have on society.
Lawbreakers are kind of people who have nothing to lose, which justifies all their illegal acts. For them; abduction, robbery, drug dealing, and any other violation are their manners of living. Moreover, prison is a place for punishment that humiliates them, not a place to fix their bad behaviors, and try to make them better human beings, or treat them as a part of society that matters and adds to it, if fixed. Hence, they’re being given tons of whys to hate society more and more, although they wouldn’t have been there, if they hadn’t committed any misdeed. They get out to be homeless, outcast, and rejected, so they jump accidentally or deliberately in any opportunity that gives them anything to live by, whether it’s legal or not. For example, people who finish their penalty and find a better chance, they never go back to the corruption again. Unlike those who are rejected by society afterwards, they become wrongdoers till death.
The ultimate effects of such dilemma on society are the absence of safety, security, and the existence of the feeling of not-belonging. For instance, people will no longer feel safe and secure at one’s home as if they’re threatened all the time. In addition, it prompt an awful impact on the economy, as a result of the lack of productivity, enthusiasm, and dedication. For example, it has been proven that people back off and shut down way easily, when something attacks their stability. Lastly, all of this would probably ignite the flame of terrorism, and arises other complications, such as social discrimination, and racism.
To sum up, let’s say that disorder in society is a terrible pain in the neck. It could be caused by reacting inappropriately towards criminals, especially after being released, and results in severe hassles for society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95795795796 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72393395893 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618618618619 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5314451494 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.1875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186322214864 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595418945832 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615470490994 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130255903994 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103168071721 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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