Some people say that men are naturally more competitive than women. What extent do you agree or disagree?
Competition is believed to be one of the most basic instinct of the human beings. Hence, there is an idea claiming that naturally, men have more desire to win than their counterparts of opposite sex. In my opinion, I partly agree with this viewpoint due to the different sense of struggles both genders face.
One the one hand, in terms of physical strength and endurance, men usually assert more emphasis to show dominance because of the desire to prove their prowess. Notably, in the past, when agriculture played a significant role in sustaining the livelihood of any family, it was the men who took on the taxing burden of heavy tasks to ensure the crop yield and produce from livestocks. Hence, only by giving off a strong sense of muscular power could a man assure his family of peaceful life. Nowadays, when agricultural labor is not as taxing, men need to show their endurance in the face of office work, which requires lots of mental strength to accomplish. For example, a man needs to work for long hours with multiple deadlines to sustain his job, which is vital to his family livelihood.
On the other hand, women tend to concentrate on more matter regarding to beauty. Specifically, there is a strong desire among female population to appear and sustain a charming image, which alleviates much confidence. Hence, it is not strange to witness a fierce race among women to display their best appearance, which they pay much attention to detail to perfect. Yet, this phenomena is reverse among the male counterparts as male quest for beauty is quite more calm.
In conclusion, each gender has own goal to thrive to. When it comes to physical prowess, men would put their strongest effort, yet women usually pay much attention to perfect their appearance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, regarding, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87417218543 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64181972097 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605960264901 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8933406085 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113199891123 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381307704531 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337178324814 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712840018984 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289517815237 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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