If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable
A goal is a set of desired achievement, it is a something that people yearn to achieve and strive toward its earning. The prompts states that if a goal is found to be worth it any action taken to achieve those goals can be justified and I agree to an almost complete extent
It is imperative to note that there are actions which can never be justified not matter how clean the intention,this might come as a negator to the common saying that “The end justified the means”, not all end justifies their means as some means should never be towed, take an example of a fraudster who acts as a Robin Hood and steals money from innocent Rich people only to distribute the money and properties stolen anonymously to feed the poor or the vulnerable, his intentions, however poor can never be justified by the way through which it was achieved as there can never be a satisfactory explanation to hurting an innocent human being to satisfy another innocent human being
Goals are not meant to be easy,as a matter of fact, goals are more adorable when they are achieved by breaking boundaries, overcoming obstacles and doing the impossible just to get them done.
Goals being the core of human existence, all humans are driven by goals, goals are what wakes us up in the morning and get us up and going, goals are what makes us stay awake at night while staring at the ceiling, goals are what makes us soliloquies when we are alone, goals are what keeps us going , being as essential as this is to us, any means taken to achieve a set of goals can be justified
In conclusion, goals are disparate and vary from person to person but despite this fact we should all strive and take any means possible to achieve our set of goals
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: state
... strive toward its earning. The prompts states that if a goal is found to be worth it ...
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...and I agree to an almost complete extent It is imperative to note that there are ...
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...ified not matter how clean the intention,this might come as a negator to the common ...
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... not matter how clean the intention,this might come as a negator to the common sa...
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...be towed, take an example of a fraudster who acts as a Robin Hood and steals mone...
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... being to satisfy another innocent human being Goals are not meant to be easy,a...
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... being Goals are not meant to be easy,as a matter of fact, goals are more adora...
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...are alone, goals are what keeps us going , being as essential as this is to us, an...
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... achieve a set of goals can be justified In conclusion, goals are disparate and v...
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...arate and vary from person to person but despite this fact we should all strive a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 313.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51118210863 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4920987559 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504792332268 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.2370786517 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 104.0 23.0359550562 451% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 378.113151789 60.3974514979 626% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 470.666666667 118.986275619 396% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 104.333333333 23.4991977007 444% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.0 5.21951772744 479% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250291542202 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156765002613 0.0831039109588 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747097281463 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150302760453 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493399531475 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 52.0 14.1392134831 368% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -17.16 48.8420337079 -35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 41.5 12.1743820225 341% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.06 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.32 8.38706741573 135% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.8971910112 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 43.6 11.2143820225 389% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.