Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that the extinction of certain species of plants and animals is the key environmental issue nowadays. Personally, I believe that there are more crucial problems relating to the environment that we need to pay more atttention to.
On the one hand, the loss of some species has affected widely to other species and the environment as a whole. Huarango trees, for example, are the plant that has the longest roots in the world, so they play an important role in storing water not only for themselves but also for other plants. In other words, the disappearance of this tree resulted in deserts in the wide area. Furthermore, huarango forests also are the places for various species to live in. When some animals lose their habitats, it is likely to lead to the extinction of some creatures, in general, the ecosystem is threatened as well.
On the other hand, I believe that there are some vital problems that people should concern about, ranging from climate change and waste to air polution. The Earth is increasingly become warmer because carbon dioxide footprint released to the environment, as a result, a host of other problems happened such as ice smelting, natural disasters. This is the emergency problem that all countries should find out solutions as soon as possible. Besides, air pollution also affected significantly to people who live in big cities around the world, leading to health problems. Finally, the world’s population is increasing quickly and the waste that people produced is not treated properly. Micro plastic is an example, nowadays we use too much plastic products and they are harmful for human’s health.
In conclusion, there are several reasons why people argue that the main environmental problems of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals, in my opinion, there are also more vital issues that people should care about.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04444444444 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67847724702 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549206349206 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.059285187 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306748624382 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950611356762 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890566884413 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208778287704 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874338808234 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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