In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays it has become a challenge for governments to face with ageing population. According to some elderly people can have benefits for society while some else think this puts governments in heavy trouble. In my opinion young generation is more useful than elderly people and the disadvantages of this issue is more than advantages.
On the one hand, governments should set rules for elderly people who are retired and don’t work anymore. These people receive pensions which has cost for government because should pay money to a group of people who both don’t work in society and don’t have benefits for it. so, nations are face with this problem till now. Nations should encourage people for bring more child and support them for solving this trouble. Although this takes long about a decade it worth because after that you have the force for labor for working and help your government. In some cases, it is necessary to have elderly persons by high experience specially in danger situations which needs a professional human like support underground mines and, Uranium enrichment.
On the other hand, by natural ageing without any young generation the industries, agricultures, research and discovery are end. Because the young persons always are looking for learning new things and discover novel ways. By ageing a society this enthusiastic and motivation going lower than before and hide steadily with the passage of time. This should be considering the society need elderly with their experience and knowledge to help and guide next generation and experts finding their way. Hence, by controlling the number of adults people and young force labor this can be resolve and this country can be a grateful promote in whichever of its fields and aspects.
In conclusion, governments have a crucial role to prevent this problem and by controlling this a nation can be rise and promote.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11935483871 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61033127101 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535483870968 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6487228821 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294768827295 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106596751415 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794794185987 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187227000142 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10872247186 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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