Some people think the manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The majority of individuals believe that companies and shopping centers should reduce the amount of packaging for their goods. Meanwhile, some people declare that consumers have the authority to choose products with less packaging. This essay will discuss the argument for the both sides and give an opinion on who is the responsible for reducing packaging waste.
One one hand, the manufacturers and shopping malls should reduce the amount of packaging used. Since companies produce goods on a large scale,So , they have the power to make a big difference by using eco-friendly packaging products that are friendly to the environment, and less harmful also , cutting down on unnecessary materials. Additionally, this could reduce a lot of waste, especially if the government has push businesses in this direction. Furthermore,It would also make it easier for consumers to buy products without worrying about the packaging.
On the other side, some believe that consumers should be the ones responsible for buying products with less packaging. If more people chose to buy products with minimal packaging,Then, manufacturers would follow this trend to meet demand. Most important of all ,Consumers can influence the market by supporting brands that are more eco-friendly. Hence , this puts responsibility on individuals to make better choices in their shopping habits.
In conclusion, both manufacturers and consumers have a role to play. Manufacturers should offer products with less or better packaging, while consumers should choose these products and support companies that care about the environment. However, Working together, both sides can help reduce waste and protect the planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57976653696 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0223134679 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552529182879 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7702586035 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.428571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358711174563 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121976105159 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828566956626 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228457850962 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467126597042 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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