Some people think the manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
All customers search for the highest quality with the lowest prices, as a result, individuals think that they should have a common agreement about stores which contain both benefits. So, they think that shopping malls have to be characterized by selling cheap goods. However, other people see that selling low packaged items is not manufacturers’ responsibility but it is their own exercise to find the suitable stuff. This essay will discuss both points of view,
Being a manufacturer, profitability is the main driver for the business, but also customer needs must be taken into sellers consideration. In addition, the type of consumers and the place of the store are considered main elements in prices’ determination. All previous conditions can easily illustrate why shopping malls have to sell the products with reasonable prices especially if they are located at developing areas. Those shops could depend on mass production more than quality to guarantee profit achievement from big quantities with slim profit margins.
On the other hand, some consumers see that shopping malls should have all categories of goods and searching about cheap prices is customers’ responsibility. They see that vendors have the rights of determining whether they need high or moderate return on their investments, while each some one has to find the suitable place for his budget. There are no imposed obligations on any one to buy from certain place than another, and individuals should follow “the coat of opportunities’ theory” when they decide to shop from a certain place.
In conclusion, I see finding low packaged goods is relying on costumers more than manufacturing as prices are considered a relative matter that differs from one to other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34172661871 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99913078518 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618705035971 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.9775781578 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277712698782 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10022624886 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632652531427 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157580224791 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894441428511 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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