Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-
being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that
the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to
make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own
position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The prompts claim that we can usually learn much more from like-minded people whose views contradict our own because disagreement can cause demotivation, and tension, and impede learning. The given topic is highly contentious because different people may have disparate positions and opinions on the topic. Some may go for the topic, while others cannot argue with it all. I both consonant and dissonant with the given topic that we can usually learn much more from people whose views we can share than those whose views contradict our own. There are three reasons and examples supporting my positions are presented in the following paragraphs below.
Firstly, Most of the corporations play an important role in to make the well societies, and also play role in to make healthy environment in our societies by consuming the green house gas like methane. For instance, In Ghampower company which is located in Nepal, is efficiently working solar related project rather than hydropower project. In additional, it reduce the methene gas which is produce from hydropower, and also helps to make the people healthy. In effect, the corporations have responsibility to promote the well being societies and environments in which they operate.
Moreover, Nowadays the desert is used to generate the electricity by using the solar panel. For example, the different corporations of the the country Morocco has been used Sahara desert to produce the electricity, and provide the electricity to their societies. Furthermore, it also remove the Methane, Nitrogen, Co2 gas which is harmful for leaving thing. Consequently, Corporations play the important role in to protect the environment and societies.
In sum/conclusion, the reasons and examples presented to support the claim/position that partially agree with the essay. The Essay highlights some people believe that corporations have responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate, while others believe that the only responsibility of corporation, provide they operate within the law , is to make as much as many as possible. The examples of Ghampower company, Morocco, and Nepal telecommunication system are present to support the given statement.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 374, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... while others cannot argue with it all. I both consonant and dissonant with the g...
^
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... example, the different corporations of the the country Morocco has been used Sahara d...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... example, the different corporations of the the country Morocco has been used Sahara d...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of the the country Morocco has been used Sahara desert to produce the electricit...
^^
Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... been used Sahara desert to produce the electricity, and provide the electricit...
^^
Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... desert to produce the electricity, and provide the electricity to their societi...
^^
Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tricity to their societies. Furthermore, it also remove the Methane, Nitrogen, Co...
^^
Line 7, column 385, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ion, provide they operate within the law , is to make as much as many as possible....
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 348.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46264367816 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06873714131 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505747126437 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9172100073 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.8125 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 5.21951772744 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363124986069 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111468480276 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202093505055 0.0758088955206 267% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22392732194 0.150359130593 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179960997655 0.0667264976115 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 374, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... while others cannot argue with it all. I both consonant and dissonant with the g...
^
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... example, the different corporations of the the country Morocco has been used Sahara d...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... example, the different corporations of the the country Morocco has been used Sahara d...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of the the country Morocco has been used Sahara desert to produce the electricit...
^^
Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... been used Sahara desert to produce the electricity, and provide the electricit...
^^
Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... desert to produce the electricity, and provide the electricity to their societi...
^^
Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tricity to their societies. Furthermore, it also remove the Methane, Nitrogen, Co...
^^
Line 7, column 385, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ion, provide they operate within the law , is to make as much as many as possible....
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 348.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46264367816 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06873714131 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505747126437 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9172100073 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.8125 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 5.21951772744 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363124986069 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111468480276 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202093505055 0.0758088955206 267% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22392732194 0.150359130593 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179960997655 0.0667264976115 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.