At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support
Whether allocating the same financial support in different area in the universities such as sports, social activities and educations is a good idea or not remains open debate.
There is a broad spectrum of opinions regarding this controversial issue. While some people believe that there are some disadvantages about spending similar financial support in sports and educational branches, I contend that its merits outweigh demerits. In the following paragraphs, I shall put forth my arguments to support my views.
First, although education is the most aspect of establishing the university, the other facets of personality in students must be improved in the university simultaneously. The university is a part of a society thus, the people of this society which mean students must be educated the activities and laws related to this society. In fact, sports and social activities are other tasks of the university which must be invested a large amount of money on those to encourage students more in these areas.
Second, allocating the same budget on some activities besides the education encourage the students to be attracted more to these areas rather than wasting their time. A prime example of this matter could be spending their free time with the other students in sport clubs or social communities in the university. They can get to gather and enjoy their free time with themselves. They can also learn some skills besides of their compulsory courses and use them after education in their real life.
To sum up, it can be clear from the argument presented above that in spite the fact that some people believe that it is not essential to invest equal financial support in sports and classes, I am strongly of the conviction that spending money in sports and social activities in the universities can be a large investment for a country to use its educated people with different skills in future.
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- Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- Some parent offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school Do you think this is a good idea? 70
- At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support 65
- Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea? 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 385, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...s educated people with different skills in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, regarding, second, so, thus, while, in fact, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09206349206 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80502015502 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501587301587 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.0624338876 48.9658058833 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.666666667 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178276353496 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670738072645 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615516550895 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117528549087 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526229509991 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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