Prevention is better than cure
Out of country’s budget a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement
Prevention is better than cure and an age old term with a deep meaning.There is a notion that a greater ratio of the health budget should be allocated to health education and preventive measures rather than spending it on the treatment.In my opinion such a initiative will have numerous positive developments in the society.
Education about any genral topic give the person a genral idea idea of the issue and its negative factors.Health education can also be used as a tool to educate the genral population with information regarding various health issues.Hence leading a better understanding of the diseases that they might have to confront in the future.For example a survey was conducted by a renowned medical institute,which showed that 1700 cases of degue were reported in the year of 2012 during the dengue epidemic.However after people were educated about various aspects of the disease prevention and cure there was a staggering 25 percent drop in the cases reported in the year 2013.
Secondly diseases such as diabetes and heart disease have various modifiable risk factors.Hence these diseases can be controlled if a proper diet and regular excercise is maintained.Goverment can ensure that by building parks and recreation centers which will provide the community with a facility to improve there health standards.For instance a survey was conducted in Louisiana which put 10 people with heart disease and diabetes under observation and followed the diet and excercise of the patients vigorously.Hence subjects with a proper diet and excercise had a higher life expectancy than those who maintained and unbalanced diet.
To conclude allocation of majority of the health budget towards health education and preventive measures will have multi factorial benefits for the society and the governments
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38596491228 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17904418736 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554385964912 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.2975951904 350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 208.560542769 49.4020404114 422% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 383.75 106.682146367 360% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.25 20.7667163134 343% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.0 7.06120827912 382% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222115942222 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156297866922 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934545370002 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156297866922 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934545370002 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.6 13.0946893788 302% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.05 50.2224549098 -18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 11.3001002004 285% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.17 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.81 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.1190380762 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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