An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet
The approach taken by international organization to combat vitamin A deficiency in impoverished nations in Tagus is undoubted and noble one. But before recommending it and assuming it's foresight success several questions would need to evaluated because the the recommendation is standing on several untested conditions and faulty assumptions.
Firstly, in this argument ,it has been stated that though the new variety seeds cost more, the farmer will cultivate it forgetting their own profit relying on the promise that the Govt. will provide them subsides. There is no guaranty that it will always happen. It may happen that the farmer already knows about the economic status of the Tagus govt. They are confirm that the govt. has several other issues to tackle as it's already managing an impoverished nation. In priority list vitamin A deficiency may come later. If it is true then the farmer will not eager to cultivate new type millet and the deficiency will be it's own place.
Additionally, the argument is based on the assumption that the govt. subsides is adequate to compensate farmer's loss in cultivating vitamin A containing millet.Unfortunately there is no information about the yield of this new variety. If the crops yield becomes significantly low compared to the existing crops, then will the govt. subsides be adequate to compensate the farmer,s loss. If the farmers experience this for one year, then in the next year they will not step in this process. So before recommending this variety , crop yield should be evaluated.
Furthermore, it's assumed that the price will be same for new variety of millet in the market as other previously sold millet item. As a result people will readily adopt the new variety. This assumption is not fault proof at all because it's already implied in the argument that the cost of the seed is more than other variety. Consequently the new variety of millet will cost more than other staple food and people may not be able to afford that. If this becomes true then the recommendation of farming new variety of millet will not be fruit full.
Finally, if the recommendation intends to succeed then and have to have the predicted result, then it should evaluate the crop yield, farmer's profit and interest and confirmation the govt. subsides otherwise there will be very scant chance to be successful.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 392 350
No. of Characters: 1925 1500
No. of Different Words: 181 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.45 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.911 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.71 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 135 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 100 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.15 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.722 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.318 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.398 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.09 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 2 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...estions would need to evaluated because the the recommendation is standing on several u...
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Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...estions would need to evaluated because the the recommendation is standing on several u...
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Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... assumptions. Firstly, in this argument ,it has been stated that though the new v...
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Line 2, column 361, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'confirmed'.
Suggestion: confirmed
...omic status of the Tagus govt. They are confirm that the govt. has several other issues...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Unfortunately
...cultivating vitamin A containing millet.Unfortunately there is no information about the yield...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , s
...des be adequate to compensate the farmer,s loss. If the farmers experience this fo...
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Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ess. So before recommending this variety , crop yield should be evaluated. Furt...
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t as other previously sold millet item. As a result people will readily adopt the ...
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Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...of the seed is more than other variety. Consequently the new variety of millet will cost mor...
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Line 5, column 447, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... people may not be able to afford that. If this becomes true then the recommendati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, then, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.9520958084 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 28.8173652695 111% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 2260.96107784 87% => OK
No of words: 390.0 441.139720559 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0358974359 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83700313876 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 204.123752495 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471794871795 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 705.55239521 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6977632782 57.8364921388 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3913043478 119.503703932 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9565217391 23.324526521 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30434782609 5.70786347227 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372779400151 0.218282227539 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105441805773 0.0743258471296 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804955676174 0.0701772020484 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1914998293 0.128457276422 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930212594768 0.0628817314937 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.3799401198 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.3550499002 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 98.500998004 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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