A recently issued twenty-year study on headaches suffered by the residents of Mentia investigated the possible therapeutic effect of consuming salicylates. Salicylates are members of the same chemical family as aspirin, a medicine used to treat headaches. Although many foods are naturally rich in salicylates, food-processing companies also add salicylates to foods as preservatives. The twenty-year study found a correlation between the rise in the commercial use of salicylates and a steady decline in the average number of headaches reported by study participants. At the time when the study concluded, food-processing companies had just discovered that salicylates can also be used as flavor additives for foods, and, as a result, many companies plan to do so. Based on these study results, some health experts predict that residents of Mentia will suffer even fewer headaches in the future.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.
author is descrbing that recent study shows that consuming of salicylates can cause in reduce headache in suffered by the residents of mentia. As salicylates is the same family as aspirin which is used to treat headaches. but author made predictions on argument which can be questioned and should be answered in order to decide whether the salicylates can be added in food to treat headaches of residents of mentia.
As salicylates is the chemical compund its important to discuss side effect of the medicine as well as we also need to check psycological impact on people. It could be possible that consuming salicylates can be act as medicine for someone and may be posion for other.
Its writtent as study issued for twenty - years but its not mentioned that from when the study is conducted and what is timeline for the study as this study is not a recent study then its can be situation where salicylates can not be good medication for treat for headache.
Furhermore, its not mentioned any regulatory body will control mixing of medication in food. As we need to decide a qunity of medicine to mix in food as increase in quanity can cause harmful impact over human being and lastly can make death of people which is very severe.
In addition, survery conducted is not have adequate information to take decision as we are generlizing the thing that study is happend on some group of people and can be applied to whole. Its important to share that survey is taken on how many people and what is age group on which survey is conducted also need to check as they had any medical history or they are taking any medicine prior.
In conclusion, author need to provide more information about survey, also need to discuss a regulatory body which can control quantity being mixed in by food processing companies also need to mention that study is happened recently or not and last but not least is there any side effects by consuming the salicylates chemical.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 14 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 342 350
No. of Characters: 1591 1500
No. of Different Words: 153 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.3 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.652 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.565 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 106 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 76 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 34.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.718 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.428 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.784 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.184 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, lastly, may, so, then, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.6327345309 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.9520958084 154% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 55.5748502994 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 2260.96107784 72% => OK
No of words: 342.0 441.139720559 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75730994152 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61303871737 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 204.123752495 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459064327485 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.8473053892 136% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0343881336 57.8364921388 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.909090909 119.503703932 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0909090909 23.324526521 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 5.70786347227 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253282895742 0.218282227539 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119223111931 0.0743258471296 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108565571503 0.0701772020484 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132321895537 0.128457276422 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112088532419 0.0628817314937 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.3799401198 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.3550499002 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.197005988 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 98.500998004 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.1389221557 129% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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