Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
In Today's modern world there is no difference between men and women in terms of types of job he/she can do. Due to the physical differences in men and women, one should not digrace men/women and keep them behind. In my opinion i disagree with the statement that due to inherent physical differences they are not equally suited for many tasks. I bolster my position with the following 2 points.
To begin with, People consider women weaker than men and thus they force them not do things which the men do. For example, In army many people think only men suits to be in army and thus discourages women to enter the army. Now as the times have changed, women are also joining the army and proving everyone that they may look weak but they are'nt weak. Another Example - Kalpana Chawla of india was the first women astronaut to step on moon. Where every men feared of going to moon kalpana came forward and took this opportunity and proved that women are no weaker than any men. To strengthn my point lets take another example - Indira Gandhi was the first female prime minister of india. My becoming the first female prime minister she proved that even women can run the country just like men. All these example tells us that due to physical differences one should not be partial in assigning task to either men or women, both should be considered equal.
In addition, Its not that only women are kept away from performing task. Some people think that running home is only womens duty and men will just earn money. Even men can run the house. For Example - There are many house-husband now a days which shows the society that men can also run house. Another Example -Chef Vikas Khanna is the first Inidan Chef to recieve a medal for the best chef. In restuarants one will find men chefs more compared to female chefs. This clearly shows that based on physical differences the task must not be divided, anyone let it be a men/women can do that task.
In contrast, There are some sort of works such as lifting heavy things, here physical difference can play a role. As women are not physically that much stronger than men so such tasks of lifting heavy things could be done by men only. But, due to the inventions of machines like a forklift many such heavy things could be picked up easily and also can be carried form one place to another. Operating a forklift is not that difficult therefore, such physical task can also be done by women with the help of machines.
In conclusion, Physical differences should not be a gateway for any task. Nobody in the world should be considered not efficient to perform a task. Anybody can do any task if he/she wills to do that task.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, sort of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2196.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 481.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56548856549 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25584261416 2.79657885939 81% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474012474012 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1808999343 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.4615384615 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272251993115 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880078968592 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613450657337 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173368645299 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434257572332 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.